“The Aquarium Accident”

This is a story from 3rd grade, it is very well done, and very outlaid. ~Madison E.

The Aquariam Accedent

By: Madison Ellingsworth

Chapter1

It was a bright sunny,summer day in june for Madison’s b-day party. Madison,
Tayadee, Jetae, Georgia, Ahmir and Madison’s parents were all at the aquariam. Then they heard a crash.They went to see what happened.There was water and glass everywhere.The kids asked “What happened”? The janitor says his name is “Ferb” and Georgia notices some fish food on his cart.The janitor says that a rare fish was stolen!

Chapter 2

So the kids set out to find the fish.Then when they got somewhere safe Georgia said’’I
found some fish food on the janitors cart’’! Tayadee wrote down ’fish food’ in her notepade.Jetae
said we have to split up! Jetae and Ahmir are partners, Madison and Tayadee are partners, and Georgia and her parents are partners.

Then they went in different directions. Tayadee and Madison find the hippo room, Ahmir and Jetae find the shark room,and Georgia and her parents find the fish rooms. Then Georgia says’’I’m hungry’’. So they go to get the other kids.

Chapter 3

So everybody got a hot dog and french fries.Then Georgia walked over to the janitor and
asked ‘’what happend ?’’.The janitor says’’Everything has been going wrong sine the rare fish
was stolen.’’Georgia says ‘’Stolen!’’

Then the janitor says everything that has been going wrong.

•The goldfish have not been eating.
•The electric eel will not zap.
•Sharks have been eating the fish in the tank.

Chapter 4

Then Georgia told everyone the news.Everyone was shocked, and upset. Jetae said’’We have a mystery’’! So they went to look for the fish. Christy, John,and Georgia saw a bunch of fish
staring at the tank. Georgia wrote down strange fish in her notepad. Meanwhile Madison and Tayadee are watching the janitors cart very carefully. And found some shiny scales. Jetae and Ahmir were watching the janitor and the clock, it said 5:00.The janitor was working late!
Chapter 5

Tayadee and Madison were still hungry so they went to find a snack machine. They walked and found a door labled ‘snack machine’.They walked in and found the rare fish!

The Aquariam Accident

By: Madison Ellingsworth

Yummy Corn Muffins in October.

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